Editing Document– Abs+Ch1+Ch2

This document contains 6 chapters. I am now required to edit (Abstract+Chapter1+Chapter2) the reset will be in a separate order after I get the approval of the edited version.

Please resolve the following comments that I received from my supervisor shown below:

• The story line is not there. At one point I was led to believe that the focus is on the energy and gas sector, companies in the energy sector in the Kingdom of Bahrain, projects related to innovation management. I suggest that you focus on either a few organisations or a parastatal which operates the energy grid in the Kingdom of Bahrain. This gives focus to your analysis as your unit will be very explicit.
• Have SMART research objectives. The ones you have right now are general. Also include research aims. I provided guidance in the document attached.
• The introduction needs to be rewritten. You need to articulate your motivation, develop your theoretical argument to showcase the gap in the current knowledge which you intend to fill. Layout your contributions to research on innovation management. E.g., you could argue that in the context of Bahrain innovation management processes differ from what the literature on innovation management suggest. This could be based on culture, political and social factors. I have provided a lot of comments.
• Your literature review is not a literature review in a sense. You seem to have a lot about the context of Bahrain. I suggest you critically analyse, evaluate, and synthesise the literature on innovation management like you did in parts of your methodology section (you will see my comments in the file attached). At the end of this literature review section, you then present your theoretical model which you seem to have just bundled into your methodology section.
• As you undertake your literature review you need to spotlight the limitations of current studies on innovation management. In doing so you will be priming your reader of the potential contributions of your own study.
• Later on in your findings section you started to show us your hypotheses. Where were these derived from? How did you come up with them? Normally, hypotheses are developed after undertaking a thorough literature review – I am not sure you demonstrate at all.
• Your literature review is mainly descriptive.
• Generally, there is a lot of verbose in the document. I have highlighted where I felt you were repeating stuff.
• Resolve the (50) comments in-text comments.

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