Learning Goal: I’m working on a english report and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.

Revision- you will revise a paragraph of your essay and post it to the forum. Do not focus on grammar, spelling, or citations. Focus on higher order points in writing such as argumentation, organization, and use of sources. You will then identify the revised elements and reflect on why the revision has improved the writing. Be sure to post the “before” and “after” revision paragraphs.

Revise one paragraph from the Week 3 essay. Post the before and after versions of the paragraph.1 page paper.

In a third and separate paragraph answer the following questions:

What did you revise? Why?

How did this improve the paragraph?

What worked well?

What did you learn from writing and revising?

Specify points from your texts that you drew on to make these revisions.

I have attached below a copy of the essay

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